Introduction

David,

This is an excellent Introduction. It is clear and well written, attractively presented, and contains all the required elements. My only suggestion is to include a graphic element, such as a photo or infographic.

Susan

I would also add, David, that you need to add an overview summary couple of sentences of why this particular selection of artifacts and then create a Collection and move your pages into it. Then ensure that the permissions are set to allow all logged on users to view the Collection and you can then remove your navigation column on the left as Collections automatically create navigation at the top of the pages.

Remember that you also need to create a Conclusion page in which you refer back to your original goals and reflect on the extent to which you feel you have met, exceeded or changed them over the program. Remember also that the program is called the M.Ed. (on this pages and others).

Thanks!

Debra

David,

I echo Debra's comment. Could you add a bit of information about why you chose this particular set of artefacts to include in your e-portfolio?

Susan

Hi David:

Everything looks okay, but you will need to provide a summary of why you selected the artifacts you did as mentioned by Sue. 

I really enjoyed reading your bio. 

Rose Taylor

 

Rose

 

Hi David - very nice job.  This introductory page is clear, easy to read, and gives a nice window into who you are.  I appreciate how you talked to the life changes and fear of failure; everyone's journey has been so different, yet we are all here together.  I used to live near High Park - lovely area.
Connie